I believe I could add a lot more detail to this story to expand the length of it. I like the idea of the rattlesnake and the paisano starting a war over being the messenger but maybe I could talk about the beginning whenever they were close. The paisano could maybe betray his friend by taking his job and as far as the "war" goes, I could make them have multiple different confrontations instead of them eating the other's babies. I could also describe the setting and provide a little more sufficient background to get a sense of where the story is taking place.
(Roadrunner Searching for Prey: SvsNews)
Bibliography:
Tejas Legends by Florence Stratton. Link to Reading B
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