Wednesday, November 29, 2017

Reading Notes: The Brothers Grimm, Part A

The Elves

This is a story that I had read earlier in the semester and actually did a post, but it was the wrong time as I went into the wrong unit. I decided to choose it again because it was one of my favorite stories over the semester. If I were to change the story up, I would have had the Elves come back after the gifts the Shoemaker gave them. They could all work together and help each other out, living happily ever after.


(The Shoemaker and his Wife Spying on the Elves: Pinterest)

Bibliography:
The Brothers Grimm by D.L. Ashliman. Link to Reading A

Tech Tip: Sidebar Box

I have added a sidebar box to my blog page. It was very simple and I thought it was neat to post inspirational quotes or whatever one pleases!

Reading Notes: Grimm (Hunt), Part B

Snow-white and Rose-red

I had heard of this story when I was a boy but I believe it was a different version. This version only had one dwarf and it was not similar to the one I had heard before. I believe I could change up several things for this story such as the setting or the characters. Another thought I had was to have the two sisters who love each other so much, fight for the prince at the end of the story. It would lead to them separating and having to claim their own territories having several intentions to harm one another until one would end up with the prince.


(Snow-white and Rose-red: Pinterest)

Bibliography:
Grimm (Hunt) by Margaret Hunt. Link to Reading B

Reading Notes: Grimm (Hunt), Part A

Hansel and Grethel

I chose the beginning of the story because I felt bad for the children and what they had to endure. If I were to write a story I would have had the pebbles be real coins as God had helped them and gave Hansel a sign to run away with Grethel. He gathers as many coins as he can and they both depart that same night before their parents wake up to take them to the forest. I would have them be guided until maybe a queen encounters them and falls in love with them, taking them into her kingdom as her own children.


(Hansel and Grethel talking to their Old Lady: Wikipedia)

Bibliography:
Grimm (Hunt) by Margaret Hunt. Link to Reading A

Reading Notes: Grimm (LibriVox), Part B

The Twelve Huntsmen

This was the story I enjoyed most for the second part of the reading. I had a different image of how the story was going to end. In the end I believed that his first love would try to kill the king or do something to hurt him. If I were to change the story I could do several different things such as have his first love kill the king's second wife and then create some drama. But the second thing to come to mind was to make the story a little longer where the second wife goes home and her father is outraged, calling for a war with the other king.


(The King and his Lion: ElevenBooks)

Bibliography:
Grimm (LibriVox) by Edgar Taylor and Marian Edwardes. Link to Reading B

Reading Notes: Grimm (LibriVox), Part A

The Frog Prince

This is a unit that I am somewhat familiar with as I have heard several of these stories when I was a little boy. This story was one of my favorites and one that stuck to me to this day. I had always wondered why the princess followed the frog's orders so if I were to change the story up I would make it so that the princess actually ends up falling in love with the frog itself. She has always been desperate for love and after the frog does anything and everything for her, she ends up falling in love with the frog before he turns into the prince.


(The Frog Prince near the Spring: Infantil)

Bibliography:
Grimm (LibriVox) by Edgar Taylor and Marian Edwardes. Link to Reading A

Tuesday, November 21, 2017

Reading Notes: Japanese Fairy Tales, Part A

The Stonecutter

I thought this story was very interesting. I wish I would have come upon this one during this unit because I could see several different ways in which to change it. The man was so selfish that maybe I could have had him stay a rock at the end forever or had certain consequences for each change. I did not like how he kept changing himself because he would find something else to complain about each time. His ignorance and greediness would come back to haunt him in the end.


(The Stonecutter: MTidry)

Bibliography:
Japanese Fairy Tales by Andrew Lang. Link to Reading A

Friday, November 17, 2017

Week 13 Storytelling: Uhtred Goes Hunting

Uhtred, Lord of Bebbanburg, had just finished preparations for the upcoming winter and was minded to go on one last hunt the next morning. He gathered his six, strong pointer hounds right before the sun was rising, and set forth towards his favorite hunting ground called Willow Forest. There was a myth that hunters’ who would go into Willow Forest would never come back as mountain lions would eat them. The myth never phased Uhtred and he had been going to Willow Forest ever since he could be out on his own.

Once he arrived to Willow Forest, he quickly unleashed his pointers. This hunting ground was filled with rabbits and deer since it was avoided by mostly all the hunters. His pointers chased the rabbits and deer until they separated one and would grab ahold of it until Uhtred caught up to them. As Uhtred was following the growls and barking of his hounds, he heard a howling sound from a pack of wolves in the distance. His pointers quickly retreated to him frightened and whining from the loud sound they had heard from the wolves. Uhtred was surprised and decided to see what all the fuss was about that his hounds were making. He walked towards where his hounds had been and spotted the wolves. The wolves had killed two deer and were just sitting on top of them. Uhtred picked up some stones and threw them at the wolves, eventually scaring them off. His hounds quickly pounced on the already dead deer, acting as if they had been the ones to catch them. As Uhtred was tying the deer’s legs together to drag them off, another man approached him.

“How could you to do such a thing?”, askedthe mysterious man.

Distraught, Uhtred quickly drew out his sword and asked him who he was.

“I am Lord Ragnar, King of the Danes. It’d be best if you untie the deer and go back as where you came.”, replied the man.

Uhtred withdrew his sword after the Ragnar stated he was King of the Danes. The Danes were known to be terrible people with a lot of ambition to kill and take land. Uhtred wanted no part in an argument with a Dane and apologized to Ragnar knowing swords would be drawn either way.

Ragnar was a hard man to please and would not accept his apology as he felt insulted. They both came to an agreement that he would pardon Uhtred as long as he did him one favor. Ragnar had a magical potion with him that would exchange a person’s image with another person. He told Uhtred that he would not make it another winter in Dane country because of how harsh the conditions were. Uhtred agreed to exchange lives until the end of winter, and then they would meet on a certain date back in Willow Forest.

The time passed and as Uhtred was suffering the harsh and unbearable weather conditions with the Danes, Ragnar was taking advantage of the more tolerable conditions in Bebbanburg. When the date of the meeting came to exchange back to their normal lives, only Uhtred showed up as Ragnar fell in love with Uhtred’s land and wife.




(Pointer Dogs: Pinterest)


Author's Note:
The original story is called “Pwyll Goes Hunting” in the Mabinogion Unit. Pwyll takes his dogs hunting to Glyn Cuch, a part of his dominions. He lets his dogs go to start the hunt but after a while notices the sound of other hounds in the area coming in the opposite direction. He approaches his hounds standing on the edge of a glade staring at the other hounds that he had heard. The other dogs had captured a stag but Pwyll scared them off and orders his dogs onto the stag. As he orders them onto the stag, another man approaches him and asks him what he thinks he is doing. The other man is King Arawn and is angry with Pwyll but then Pwyll asks how he can redeem himself. The King then tells him about a situation he is in back in his Kingdom that involves King Havgan. Havgan is always contradicting Arawn and both of them are set to duel a year from this day. Arawn tells Pwyll to take his form with a special potion and go in his place to fight Havgan, then in a year come back to switch their forms again. Pwyll agrees as this is the only way Arawn will forgive him. For my story I tried to follow the same script but with different characters and a different twist. Uhtred is “Pwyll” and Ragnar is “Arawn” in my story. Instead of Ragnar having a dispute back home, he is just tired of the harsh living conditions that the winter will bring. He tells Uhtred he will forgive him if he takes his place just for the winter. Once the winter is over Ragnar does not come back as he has fallen in love with Uhtred’s wife and his land.

Bibliography:
"Pwyll Goes Hunting" from Mabinogion Unit by Lady Charlotte Guest. Web Source.

Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Reading Notes: King Arthur, Part B

The Adventure of Sir Percivale

I liked the ending to this story about how Percivale ends up becoming close to the lion that he saved from the serpent. I don't think I would change the ending but maybe I could introduce different characters along the way that offer him things in exchange for promises that he does not keep. I also thought about having the knight that he was chasing, turn around and fight Percivale after the knight has already killed the hackney. I could have him kill the knight and the story drastically changes.


(Sir Percivale Slaying the Serpent: Pinterest)

Bibliography:
King Arthur by Andrew Lang. Link to Reading B

Reading Notes: King Arthur, Part A

The Drawing of the Sword

I don't think I remember choosing the beginning of a story for any of my reading notes thus far so I decided to choose this particular story to write about. As I was reading it I could think of several different ways to change the story. One way that came to mind is that I could have Arthur's stepfather know that Arthur is the only one that would be able to draw the sword. Ector would learn of this when Arthur is brought to him as a baby by Merlin. Arthur's stepbrother Kay is also aware but is very jealous so he tries to keep Arthur away by thinking of different things to prevent Arthur from getting the sword.


(Arthur Drawing the Sword in front of Knights: Pinterest)

Bibliography:
King Arthur by Andrew Lang. Link to Reading A

Wednesday, November 8, 2017

Reading Notes: Mabinogion Unit, Part B

The Ring upon the Finger

I believe I could follow the same outline of this story except for making it a bit more dramatic. When the king sends Rhun to disgrace the wife of Elphin, he goes with intent to kill her and bring her body back to the kingdom. Once he kills the 'mistress' he flees with her body back to the kingdom to try and put Elphin in misery. Once Elphin finds out that it is not his wife he laughs and humiliates Rhun calling for his execution for murder. The king is upset and sets Elphin go in exchange for pardon of his son.

(The Ring: JcPenny)

Bibliography:
Mabinogion by Lady Charlotte Guest. Link to Reading B

Reading Notes: Mabinogion Unit, Part A

Pwyll Goes Hunting

As I was reading this story I could picture several different things that could happen while the Prince is hunting in the woods. I plan on sticking to the original story as far as whenever the prince and king agree to meet again in a year after the prince has slain the other king. Instead of having the prince meet the king in a year as they said, the prince ends up falling in love with the queen over the years span and decides that he likes the king life better. Once the king realizes that the prince has not kept his word, he makes the decision to go to the kingdom and retake his throne. With everyone thinking the king is crazy and the prince humiliating him on his own thrown, the prince orders his execution and remains king for the rest of his life.


(Pwyll duels Havgan: Sacred-Texts)

Bibliography:
Mabinogion by Lady Charlotte Guest. Link to Reading A

Friday, November 3, 2017

Week 11 Storytelling: How the Ponca Discovered Horses


Long ago, there was an Indian tribe that lived in what today is known as the state of Nebraska. They called themselves the Ponca and had been living in the area for many years. One day, the men of the tribe went on a hunt for buffalo. The men of the tribe would always go to the same location where they previously had killed buffalo because they would always come back. This time, there were no buffalo in the area and the men started to hesitate. Led by their chief, Standing Bear, he commanded that they go a little further over a mountain to see if they could spot any from above. Not too far in the distance, they could see the herd of buffalo running around with other animals not familiar to the Ponca.


(A Herd of Buffalo in Nebraska: National Geographic)

The herd of buffalo finally escaped the odd animals, but a few had been killed off. They then saw a man jump off of the animal and the Ponca realized that these animals were being controlled by other men not from their tribe. Standing Bear was furious seeing that his tribe was being robbed of their game. He ordered his men to shoot their bow and arrows towards the other men to try and scare them off. They did not even flinch because they had never seen bow and arrows before. The weapons that these men used were simply clubs made out of animals they had killed. One of the men with the strange animals mounted his animal and rode towards Standing Bear and his tribe. He did so calmly with a hand in the air as if he was saying he was going peacefully. Standing Bear then started to approach the mysterious man and yelled “Go no further for my men will pierce you with arrows if you and that creature take another step.”

“I am Short Horn of the Padouca tribe, why is it you have come into our territory?” asked the man on the animal.

Standing Bear looked around at his men and together they started laughing “Your territory? The Ponca have owned this land for many many years and have never had such encounter with man and beast.”

“This here is called a horse and it is friendly to mankind” replied Short Horn. “I see that we talk the same language, could we sit down and talk as peaceful men?”


(Ponca Indians Meeting on Horses: Texas History)

Standing Bear nodded and Short Horn jumped off of his horse. They talked for a good hour or so and got along just fine. Standing Bear offered Short Horn that he and his men could come to his village to celebrate their alliance. Short Horn was honored and gathered his men and horses then followed the other tribe back to their village. They had brought back two of the buffaloes they had killed to have a feast that same night.

The two tribes gathered around fired and had a great night getting to know one another. Everybody was in high spirits and then Standing Bear made an announcement, “My people come together as our new friend Short Horn has asked for the right to marry one of my descent to unite both tribes as one.” Everybody shouted and danced in excitement but there was one man who did not look so happy.

Short Horn’s younger brother had been watching the horses and keeping a distance from the people. “What fool my brother is whenever our people are waiting for the days killing to feed the tribe” thought his brother. 

He had always been envious of Short Horn since his older brother had the command and now would marry another woman. He quickly got together a few of his men and started insulting them and making them feel bad for agreeing to come to this village while their own tribe was starving. He convinced the men that they would all wake up dead in the morning for all Standing Bear and his tribe wanted was their horses. As soon as the feast was over and everyone was fast asleep, Short Horn’s brother and the men attacked. They left nothing but bloodshed and burned the village to the ground. Short Horn had been killed by his own brother, and the command of the tribe was now his.

Author's Note:
The original story is called “Tradition of Finding Horses” and it involves both of the Ponca and Padouca tribes as I mentioned in my story. The Ponca were following the Missouri River and finally crossed it after finding a shallow spot. Once they crossed, they spotted the Padouca and would eventually have several battles with them. The Padouca were mounted on horses and the Ponca thought that the man and horse were one whole beast until a man was shot off his horse during one of the battles. Everyone stopped fighting and one of the Padouca came up to the Ponca and asked him who they were. They finally settled for peace after one of the Padouca told them a spirit had come to him out of a grave and taught him how to speak the Ponca’s language. Both tribes taught each other what they knew and the Padouca even gave some of their horses to the Ponca. Once the Ponca knew how to ride horses they went to war again with the Padouca and ended up running them out of the area and stealing their horses. I didn’t really know how to go about my story so I tried making it a little similar to the original story. I introduced two characters (Standing Bear and Short Horn) for each tribe and added some dialogue to the story. In the end once the two tribes agree to form peace, the brother of Short Horn is gets jealous and ends up gathering his men. They kill all the Ponca and retain their horses, then he is the leading commander of the Padouca.

Bibliography:
"Tradition of Finding Horses" from Great Plains by Katharine Berry Judson. Web Source